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Mystery Woman

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Peyton and Torrin were inspired to write a book after Peyton completed this 100 Word Challenge! It all started with this…

This week’s challenge – We have 5 words for you to include in your writing. They can be in any order but must ALL be there!

They are:  YELLOW   TINY   HOPELESS   SHINY   THIN

Mystery Woman Part 1

There once was a yellow-haired girl she had shiny teeth, and a tiny body. She lived in a apartment in Sedona, Arizona. Her name was Isabella. Her job was hopeless because it didn’t have a lot of customers, dinnery was poor, and they didn’t have enough money to cast a commercial. But one day it was a Tuesday (her break day) and when she came home from shopping on her counter was a thin stack of $20,000 dollars with a note ,”Spend this on your needs don’t go crazy with it and if you ever need to go to the corner store.” From L…

By Peyton

Here is their book! 

Mystery Woman Chapter 1  (Isabella)

There is a yellow-haired girl she had shiny teeth, and a tiny body. She lived in a house in Sedona, Arizona. Her name is Isabella. Her job was hopeless because it didn’t have a lot of customers, the dinery was poor, and they didn’t have enough money to cast a commercial. But one day it was a Tuesday(her break day)and when she came home from shopping on her counter was a thin stack of $20,000 dollars with a note ,”Spend this on your needs don’t go crazy with it and if you ever need to go to the corner store.” From L…

My Friend Chapter 2 (Lizabeth)

Hello my name is Lizabeth and I have a crazy story to tell you, well here we go. There is a yellow-haired, shiny teeth, and tiny bodied girl. She lives in house in Sedona, Arizona. She’s my dearest friend. My parents were rich, until one day they got a sickness called the flu and died the same day. So they gave me their money which was $800,000 so I came up with a crazy plan. My friend, Isabella worked at a diner. Her job there was a waitress and not many customers came since it was a very small diner. Since not much customers came, the diner wasn’t getting much money so each person got $5 a day. And since they didn’t get much money Isabella couldn’t afford a big house and barely any food. And so I…..

The Note Chapter 3 (Isabella)

So, I just got a crazy note. With a load of MONEY!! Jeez I wonder what L stands for. Wait my friend that past late last week in a horrible accident. I always had a secret key under a fake rock. I always thought she would return, but that never happened. That day, that one day she died it felt like the sky was falling. I was so, sad I  couldn’t even look at her home. But the L. So, many names Laura, Lisaonje, Leon, Lexia. My friends name was Lizabeth which also started with a L so I became interested in her fatal accident. I wonder if there ever was an accident, what if she never died….

The Truth Chapter 4 (Lizabeth)

I went to her house and I got the extra key under a fake rock and went inside her house. I wrote a note saying, ”Spend this on your needs don’t go crazy with it and if you ever need to go to the corner store. From L…” That money was $20,000. I put a camera looking at a kitchen counter and I went back to my house to set up the monitor and when she got home I saw here reaction she, she was so happy she forgot about me until the L, the L messed it all she just started crying, crying in a corner sad about my fake death. One day I will reveal the truth.

My First Boyfriend Chapter 5 (Isabella)

Today is a big day for me. I’m meeting someone new. Tonight at 6:00 I’m going on a date to get Liz off my mind( a few hours later). My date’s name is Ethan. When I sit down I see him talking to some of his friends then I think,”Good he’s not lonely.” He comes to sit down I see his face and think “please don’t remind me of Liz” Ethan says,” Well, hello my pretty.” I say,” Well I don’t think I’m the pretty one” Ethan says,” Well, do you want to eat or just talk?” I say,”Let’s dig in” Ethan orders something unusual for me lobster I’ve always been a more hamburger person. I say,”Wanna go to my home?” As we get there I tell him,”I have secret key under a fake rock if you’re ever in trouble.”

Ethan Chapter 6 (Lizabeth)

I just found out that Isabella got a her first boyfriend named Ethan. He is being a little suspicious. He’s talking with his friends saying that the business will be done soon. I stand up and say, “What business do you mean, murder or robbery.” Ethan says, “None, what does your business have to do with this.” I say, “Tell me or I will call the cops. Uh oh Isabella sitting over there I gotta run.” I said “I thought I was going to get caught there. Lets not have that happen again” I see Ethan running up to me so I run. I say, “I think he’s trying to hurt me I gotta get to the cops.” So I run to the cops and tell them and they don’t believe me and later that night………

The Call Chapter 7 (Isabella)

Today Me and Ethan are having another date at the movies. We’re watching Moana. When I get there he is nowhere to be seen. So, I wait another 30 minutes. Again he is nowhere to be seen. I start thinking he’s scamming me. Next, thing I know I get a call from Ethan,”Hey, I’m so sorry I couldn’t get there my mom just past and I’m at the hospital she had cancer. But, maybe next week we’ll go out to the movies again I’m so sorry I couldn’t make it.” Wow, well I feel so bad for him. I’ll watch a movie without him I guess(after the movie). I get a call from the police. It’s about….

The Robbery Chapter 8 (Lizabeth)

I go to Isabella’s to give her $10,000 dollars when I see some movement. “Is that Ethan, I knew he was up to something.” I think. I go over to her house and he is getting the key under the fake rock. “How does he know it is there?” I think. I was about to go and tackle him, but right then I see all of his friends. Ethan says, “Let’s get this done so we can get home and buy the house and stuff we need.” I call the cops and I get in the house as they get there. Then she comes, Isabella’s home. “I gotta get out of here” I say. So I break a window and leave and guess what. A piece of my shirt gets caught on the glass. “Oh no” I say. “I hope she doesn’t notice.” I say. But then (Crick Crack). Isabella’s footsteps. “I gotta run now.” And then……

The Clothes and the Robbery Part 9(Isabella)

As I get home I see police cars and I hear police sirens.” I wonder why they’re here.” I say. When I get there I ask,” What happened? Is everything OK? OMG IS THERE A DEAD BODY!?” As I get done asking questions I see one of Ethan’s friends in a police car handcuffed. Then I think is Ethan involved with it. After the investigation I set up a few cameras, so next time I’ll know who did it. But, before all of that when I got there I heard a familiar voice like Lizabeth’s. Then, her clothes on the broken window. After, that I’m now wondering if Lizabeth is really alive….

Almost Caught Chapter 10 (Lizabeth)

As I leave I hear Isabella say that she heard my voice and she says, “Is this Lizabeth’s clothes, no they can’t she died one month ago. Just forget it, you’ll never see her again.” I say, “Soon, very soon I will tell her.” As soon as I get home I look at the monitor all the police are gone and Isabella is setting up cameras. I say, “Hopefully her camera won’t get my camera caught on camera.” And then I package up $1,000 with another note saying, “So I’ve heard about the thing going on. I’m only giving you $1,000 because people have seen how you look and immediately.” From Liz……. And I was about to send the package, but I find out……

Is It Her Chapter 11(Isabella)

So, when I come home from work there’s another note, with just $1,000. By now I’ve figured the person is rich. Lizabeth’s parents were rich and the letter now is ”From Liz.” So, I’m pretty sure she’s not dead. Also, the clothes on the shattered window, but anyone can have those clothes. “Man, I wish I knew who the L was.” When all this happened I….. should just move on from this. But, there’s so much I need to know. Lizabeth’s nickname was Liz and this note has Liz on it. So, so, so much I need to know….

His Cover Chapter 12 (Lizabeth)

I find out that Ethan is the mailman and this is the perfect time to go to Isabella’s too because she is at work! This day is working out perfectly. Until, I found out Isabella moved the extra key so nobody can find it. “I guess I have to leave it on the doorstep and hope it won’t get stolen.” (Later that day) I look at the monitor and I see that Isabella’s home with a surprised look. I heard her say, “Man, I wish I knew who the L was.” But I also heard her say this before that, “But, I’m pretty sure she’s not dead.” I will go to her work before she leaves and I……..

Mondays Chapter 13(Isabella)

I didn’t get enough sleep last night. Gol-eee I really hate Mondays. I have to go to work and be mocked by little kids that throw around all their food!! As I get there, there is a lot more people than usual. When I step inside there’s a cake. I wonder whose birthday it is today. My boss hops right in front of me saying,” Isabella I’m sorry to say this, but It’s no one’s birthday and it afraids me that I have to fire you.” I say,” Why me though there’s so many other workers that don’t to do anything except eat.” He says,” You don’t cook anything the right way.” I say,” Why…” He interrupts and says,” I’m firing you and that’s final.” I walk outside to get a breath from that and I see a black Chevrolet with a familiar face inside of it. I walk closer and closer and see it’s….

The Last Note Chapter 14 (Lizabeth)

I will give her $500 dollars with a note saying, “Meet me at your job at 5:30 P.M.” From Liza. So I decide to walk to her house to give her the money.(Later that day) I’m driving in and I don’t see her there, “Maybe she isn’t here yet.” I say so I decide to wait till 6:00 P.M. to see if she is going to come. But then I look in the front door and see Isabella arguing with her boss and I hear her boss say, “I’m firing you and that’s final.” As soon he stops talking Isabella walks outside. So, before she gets out I go in my truck and there is barely any twilight left and she just stares at me. Now she is just walking closer and closer and closer until…..

The Meet Up Chapter 15(Isabella and Lizabeth)

After I get close enough I see it’s her the L. I run to her I give her a big hug. We drive to my house, when we arrive and sit down I ask,”Why didn’t you tell me first thing you weren’t dead?” She replies with a sorrow voice,”I’m sorry just after that crash, my parents death, and your boyfriend, ugh he’s the one that robbed you and one of his little pest friend is in jail for robbery.” I say,” Ethan? He’s a good man, but I did think it was him because his friend in the car. Also, he never showed up when we were meeting at the movies.” She says,” Well let’s go get ‘em…”

The End

 

 

Author: Mrs. Moore

3rd grade teacher in Arizona, USA

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  1. Great Who Done What, When, Where, Why ?

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